During reading time I read a story It was Take me to your Leader. It was about a alien and Tom the boy who was sleeping but just woke up Gweep was the alien he came from the wordrobe. I think I Did a fantastic Story Web that I did It was so amazing. I like it. Do you?
When I made the story web, I had to make a copy of it. I was amazing then I had to do the story web.
It was half easy and half hard. I really think I did a good job.
How would you like to be zaped? I would feel maybe sick or angry and shocked and scared because the alien is in the house.
Could you please rate it a 10/10 for how well I did my activity?
Hi Roisin
ReplyDeleteI like how you put lots of detill in al the parts.
It remined me of my stroy web and I seid Geep was a alin too.
Can you make your stroy wed a litte bigger?
From Cameron
thank you camron I will next time put it a little bigger.
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Hi Roisin,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put the characters Gweep sounds like a funny name.
I also learnt that gweep is an alien!
Can you put a bigger box on the the setting so that we can see it clearly?
Your doing well keep on going!
From Izza
than you Izza I will add that in next time. Yes Gweep sounds a really funny name!!
ReplyDeleteBy Roisin