I chose to write about my dad digging in my backyard and to chose to write about that I went to my God parents house!!
Can You please rate my writing out of ten? Can you spot what tools I have used?
Thursday, November 21, 2019
My weekend Anventure Fun
This week, Miss Lee told me to get all the tools we have used and I think I have done that. Nouons, verbs, Allteration, Metaphors smiles Agectives Adverbs. Nouns are naming things. Alleteration is at least 3 words like I will do s it is repeated, I am Rowing a slimy slucky surpy boat. ok that is on and smiles is you put like this there is a superhero like a amazing bird. ajectives is decribeing something I did all those things tell me if I didn't do all of them.
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Hi Roisin I like how you did a good job on your writing.
ReplyDeletecan you tell me more about what had went kaboom.
you have a good biginng of your writing.
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