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Thursday, December 19, 2019

activity 2 day 2 SLJ one small step for man

Hi Bloggers,
For this activity 2 Day 2 I have to Imagine I am Landing on the moon.
And I have to do a poem that is Describing.
about landing on the moon this activity is 4 points It is called One small step for Man.
I am not making fun of names i am just rhyming it.  Let’s start. 


There’s a little rocket
pointing at the moon.
Now it’s getting fueled up
It'll be ready soon.
When it’s time to say goodbye

The rocket will be going zoom.




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2 comments:

  1. Hi Roisin!

    Mikey here. Congratulations on completing another activity! You're doing an amazing job. :)

    What a great little poem! I really like how you've made it rhyme. I always find writing rhyming poetry so tricky. Do you like doing creative writing activities like this one?

    Keep up the great work, Roisin. And have a Merry Christmas too! :)

    Bye for now,

    Mikey

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    1. Hi Mikey
      I like the way you are saying stuff like I like your poem thank you!
      I do like doing creative writing activity's like this one thank you
      You also have a Merry Christmas too thank you
      Bye
      Roisin

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