Persuadeing Mr Norman

I am persuadeing Mr Norman to go on youtube and Tik Tok it will be fun if he says yes I love Tik Tok and Youtube.

 Plan

Writing

Did you know Mr Norman Youtube is fun and you can type anything but we will not type killing and did you know Mr Norman Youtube can actually make you smart ; )

 Can we please go on Youtube on our( the school's chrome book, acer or our chrome books.)

 Can we please subscribe to channels and turn on the bell, comment. ;) !! it will be fun!!

I have an account at home if I sign in my chromebook, acer  because at home I use it for commenting on Youtubers.

Can we please go on Youtube and Tik Tok. If we can go on YouTube, we can be independent if we have our headphones on. If we don’t have headphones we can buy some if our Mum and Dad says no if our Mum and Dad says yes then they can buy it. If we go on Tik Tok we can be independent too because we can search up Youtubers like Roisin Taylor.

If we are on youtube we can have fun on it. We search up something that’s fun it will be super super fun. I love Youtube and Tik Tok it is superstar like 100 percent : )

We can learn stuff around the world like America. We can search it up like if I was a Youtuber and I was a armerecan you can search me up like has Roisin Taylor have a spine? Then It will probably say something like yes. On Tik Tok you can do music but you can do the music and actions  or if you don’t want to you don’t have to.

We can comment, subscribe( that means you can like I think you love them) turn on the bell, give it a thumbs up and have fun turn on the bell that means you can get notifications that means you get videos that you probably like.

As you can see I have put reasons why I want Youtube and Tik Tok on our chrome books I hope you like my reasons why I want Youtube and Tik Tok It is fun to have Tik Tok and Youtube; )

I maked changes because I looked at persuadeing Mr Norman I looked at the comments I had one so I maked a change folowed what the comment said here it is it lookes the the same but I autally not the same.