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Wednesday, March 27, 2019

big dogs

this is about writing  i wrote about it because i love dogs and puppy

4 comments:

  1. nice job.
    All I think is you should in cloud your writing!
    You picked a good photo I did that photo to.
    Great try.

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  2. Hi roshin!
    good job.
    I like how you told us what Jack did.
    Could you please add how jack get the tire?
    Keep on doing your great work!

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  3. Hi Roisin. My name is Ashleigh from Hornby pirmary school. I like how you shaped the dogs. I like the dogs in the photo. Maybe you can take the photo with out the blue line. Do you like dogs?

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