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Wednesday, August 12, 2020

Blog commenting

 What I know about commenting on blogs:

You have to put a positive and helpful comment 

You have to put at least 1 positive and helpful thing about there blog post

You have to put a question like Maybe next time you could add detail?

first have a greeting

You have to press notify me  and post it.

You have to not put private information.

my first comment today is on Robert's Blog

no swearing

don't hurt people's feeling's


Hi Robert

I like how you described what you are doing.

I like what you have been learning about

This post is helpful because you are saying that you learned a new shortcut

maybe next time you can make the screenshot more clear?

Well done 

From Roisin


Wednesday, August 5, 2020

What makes a Good Comment? Read this to find out more!

Hey Bloggers,


Today in Cyber Smart we are working about what is a good comment and a bad comment. we also learnt what is not a good comment and a comment with private information.


Can you see what's wrong with this comment?

Comment below.


My learning came out good and I learn about positive comments and now I know what makes a good comment.


Thank you for looking at my blog post can you rate 1 to 10


Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Persuasive writing

Hey Bloggers,
For writing I had to improve my writing and I think it is good I am finished I think it is good let me know what you thing can you please rate it out of 10.

 this is my first go at persuasive writing 


but this is my good writing my improved writing